Dear Reader,
I did project in order to elaborate more on the
reasons, why someone would want to cheat. In my opinion, the most significant
reason, why athletes cheat is that they are surrounded with high expectations
that they fear that they will not be able to achieve. My thesis and my
expository essay discuss the reasons, why people cheat, such as the high expectations
and that even though there are many athletes that get caught each year cheating
they still continue to cheat and risk being seen as a cheater. This is also
closely related to my golden thread, which is that success is an expectations
that keeps on increasing and that once someone succeeds they will continue to
want more and to go above and beyond the previous expectations. It is very easy
to become hungry for more success and to achieve more once someone achieves
something. Success is time consuming and requires a lot of hard work, but the
reward can be even greater.
My pieces in this multi-genre project discuss all of
the various aspects success and its significance and importance in the lives of
athletes. The first piece is a quality piece about success that uses personification
of success to summarize the life of Lance Armstrong. Success is a very dominant
yet lonely force. If someone wants to be really successful in anything that
they do they must almost abandon everything else that they do and only focus on
the things that truly matter to them. It is for that reason that a lot of
people do not like success as well as the fact that people eventually become
very jealous of the accomplishments of an individual. This presents the nasty
side of success that shows how people can be jealous of one’s success and will
even try to do anything they can to make them go away. The first piece also
discusses the importance of being honest, while succeeding, because if someone
ends up cheating then everything they do might be brought to questioning and as
a result they might not achieve anything and be remembered as a cheater. In my
second piece, which is a T-shirt design, I try to relate the idea of high
exceptions and success to myself. As a swimmer, I train very hard and that comes
at sacrifice, such as not exceeding in school as much as I want to or giving up
time that I could spend with friends for another practice and another chance to
improve my swimming. The T-shirt shows my goals as a swimmer and what I want to
become and that is a very important goal for me, to go to the Olympics one day.
My third piece discusses the fear that an athlete might have before a race or a performance, which is supposed to
help the reader visualize and try to image, where the idea of cheating might
come from and how the process is very stressful. The poem is a pantoum and I try
to extend it a couple more lines to keep the idea going and to incorporate all of
the negative through and the pressure felt before a race, which is crucial to
understanding the importance and the need to succeed that an athlete can feel
before a race. Finally, my last piece is a convincing piece that shows how an
athlete can be convinced to cheat, how the last moments of insecurity before a
race can cause an athlete to try and take some performance-enhancing substances
in order to secure a position or make sure that they win and succeed. This is
another poem, but is meant to be read as two voices. On the left we have a
voice of dishonesty trying to convince the swimmer on the right that they are
not capable of achieving their goals and that they need something extra to get
to succeed in the race that is about to happen. All of the pieces show the
various phases and steps in cheating, weather it is insecurity or the need to
cheat or the pressure to accomplish a goal. All of these combine and finally
force an athlete to cheat, which is very harmful to the athlete if they get
caught.
Overall, in this project I tried to show to the
audience the significance of the issue of cheating in the world of sports.
Cheating ruins the integrity of the game. This project has also made up my mind
about cheating. Originally, I thought that there could be ways that cheating
could be tolerated, but after researching and realizing that it ruins the
experience of the game, I realize that it should be punished. Even if it does
not help the teams achieve their goals, such as the well-known Deflategate, the
athletes that cheat should be banned from the sport, because they question loyalty
and the very integrity of the sport. I believe that it is important to look at
the reasons why athletes cheat, because that might help preventing future
generations from cheating, by reducing the pressure and the need to succeed
that they face, but it should never be any form of justification for any type
of cheating.
Sincerely,
Maciej Olszewski
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